5202-考研英语考前30天狂背作文-第14部分
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心得：
图表题出现得较少，变化也比图画题少一些。我们应首先熟悉图表中对于数据变化的描述，而后对全文段落的安排做到心中有数。
Direction 20
Study the following table carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the table；
2。 interpret the trend；
3。 make your ments。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
指标名称 1989 1997 2002
每万人口医院床位数（张） 22。8 23。5 23。2
每万人口医生数（人） 15。2 16。1 14。7
人均卫生总费用支出（元） 76。7 186。4 442。5
审题：
审题包括两个部分，一个是读图画或图表，一个是看提纲。成功的审题就是将两者有机地结合起来，确定文章的最终布局。这道题还是属于图表题中的表格题，比较特殊。表格中共有三个变量，应该看出来有一个变量，即人均卫生总费用支出是大幅增长的，而另两个变量，即每万人口医院床位数和每万人口医生数，是基本未变的。第一段的工作就是描述这两个趋势。第二段中阐释这一趋势，就是要重点突出这一对比。第三段做出评论，对于一种不能令人满意的现状甚至令人担忧的社会问题，大多数时候最好的选择就是写改进或解决问题的办法了。
Sample：
From the table we can see clearly that total medical expenses per capita rose from 76。5 yuan in 1989 to 186。4 yuan in 1997 and then to 442。5 yuan in 2002。 In the same period； the number of hospital beds every 10；000 people and the number of doctors every 10；000 people stayed at almost the same level。
This table illustrates clearly the discrepancy between the soaring medical expenses and the unsatisfactory hospital facilities。 On the one hand； the money spent on medical care has climbed sharply in the past decade。 According to the National Bureau of Statistics； the medical expense has soared to 7。3 percent of the total expenses of urban residents； and 6。0 of that of rural residents in 2003。 On the other hand； the limited scale of hospitals cannot meet the needs of our people。 It is true that we have more advanced medical instruments； but the numbers of beds and doctors have changed little over the last decade。 We all know that timely medical operation is extremely important in many cases； but how can we ensure it without finding a bed first？
To improve the present situation we have a long way to go。 In the first place； we have to standardize medical practices； regulate the drug circulation and perfect the medical care system to bring down the medical expenses。 In the second place； we should build more firstclass hospitals； expand the scale of present hospitals and turn out more medical talents。 If all of these can be acplished our people will surely receive better medical care and live a happier life。
点评：
本文共分三段。第一段两句话，第一句话以常见的句型From the table we can see clearly that开始，描写了人均卫生总费用支出逐年攀升的事实。而第二句以In the same period强势开头，描述了其它两个变量基本不变（stay at almost the same level）的情形，概括性很强。
第二段首句对上面的数字变化进行总结，突出了discrepancy（差异）一词，一方面是高涨（soar）的医疗费用，另一方面是不能令人满意的医院设施，而后分两方面来说。第一方面分两句话，先说医疗费用剧烈攀升。而后举出国家统计局的数字，是医疗费用占城市和农村居民支出的百分比，很有说服力。如果我们没有确凿的数据，就不要这样写，切忌胡编乱造。另一方面的描述共分三句话，先说医院有限的规模无法满足人民的需求。第二句相当于although引导的让步状语从句，但是语气更强一些——我们虽然医疗器械有所改进，但床位数和医生数无甚改观。最后一句话说我们都知道及时的手术很重要，可如果连床位都没有怎能保证手术呢？
第三段写改进的办法。首句是总括句，说我们任重道远，而后分两方面来说。第一方面是说采取措施（规范医疗操作、调控药品流通和优化医疗保健体系）来降低医疗费用。第二方面是说通过建立更多的一流医院、扩充现有医院的规模和培养更多的医学人才来解决当前的矛盾。最后一句是结语——如果所有这些都能实现，我们的人民一定能接受更好的医疗保健，过上更幸福的生活。
心得：
要想写好一篇文章，首先是审题——对图表（图画）和提纲所构成的语境的把握一定要准确。其次是具体到段落，在遣词造句上一定要考究，要多下功夫。平时多积累，多写作是很重要的，因为能够成为考题的潜在主题不超过两百个，很多词、词组与句型出现的几率更要高得多，所以平时的积累和操练至关重要。
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Directions 11
Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the two pictures；
2。 give the reasons of such a phenomenon； and
3。 list possible solutions。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
这篇文章的结构很典型，而选择的写法却很特殊——我们选择兼顾图画所体现的两方面的问题，即自私和违反规则两个方面。如果第一段这样来点明，那么第二段和第三段均应这样展开，使文章形成一个有机的整体。
Sample：
In the first picture； two persons are talking loudly in the library as if they were the only persons there。 In the second picture； a man is talking happily on the phone in the cinema； while a film is on。 From these two pictures； we e across such people who are so selfish as to always think of themselves instead of others on the one hand； and who are so bold as to defy those rules and regulations on the other hand。
Why do they behave in this way？ On the one hand； they are brought up in such a way as to take their own interests into consideration whenever anything arises。 This may not be the original purpose of parents and teachers； but this is largely the result of today’s education。 Children learn from what adults do； not what they say。 Years of teaching in class and family may tell them how to do； but hours of reallife practice may be more influential。 On the other hand； they are brought up in such a way as not to take rules and regulations seriously。 In their belief； rules and regulations only restrain those silly people； and the violation of them can be both exciting and admirable。
To solve this problem； all of us have a long way to go。 First； teachers and parents should act in such a way to teach young children to always take others into consideration whenever they take action。 Second； the authorities should severely punish anyone who violates rules and regulations。 To protect the rights of more people； such punishment is more than necessary。
点评：
第一段先用两句话描述两幅图画，而后用一句话做总结，用on the one hand和on the other hand将问题的两个方面清晰地表达了出来。
第二段的首句没有使用传统的表示原因的模板句，如The reasons for this phenomenon are twofold / threefold。而是用了一个设问句，使行文显得生动活泼。之后分两个方面来说明为何他们会自私和不遵守规则。
第三段首句是典型的办法类的模板句。而后分两方面来说解决问题的办法，与第一段、第二段严格对应。
心得：
这篇文章给我们留下的最大的印象就是前后呼应，三段采用了同样的结构，这样读来自然觉得流畅。
就句子写作而言，内部突出对比的句子总是给人留下深刻的印象，下面我们就以第二段的第一点为例来说明。这一点分四句话，后三句都属于句内表示对比的情形。第二句话一针见血——这不一定是父母和老师的初衷，但却是今天教育的结果。大家自然要想，为何结果偏离了初衷呢？下面接着说，孩子们学的是大人的做法，而不是说法。这句话简练、深刻。下面一句最为精彩，多年的学校和家庭教育告诉他们如何去做，而数小时的实践可能更加有影响力。这明确地说明，只有投入了真实的生活之中，孩子们才能真正有所体会，才能真正成长。没有真实生活的洗礼，孩子们又怎能了解人生的真理，怎能为他人考虑呢？
好的句子是深入思索（思想方面）和不断练习（语言方面）相结合的结果，只要我们不懈努力，总有达到“何意百炼钢，化为绕指柔”的那一天。
Directions 12
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the picture；
2。 interpret their meaning； and
3。 make your ment on this phenomenon。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
这篇文章配的图很简单，而意义却是深刻的。提纲的第二部分和第三部分分别是阐释含义和做出评论，我们可以分成三块来写：提出问题——从两方面分析——下结论。这样文章包含开始描述图画的部分就有了四个部分。
笔记本电脑可以写作laptop puter； portable puter； notebook puter； notebook PC，在文中应替换使用。
Sample：
In the above picture a university student is phoning his mother； “In order to make progress in my study； I want to buy a laptop puter。”
Is a laptop puter indispensable？ Does a laptop puter mean greater possibility of academic excellence？ Does a student without a laptop puter have no chance of success？ It is obvious that the drawer wants all of us to think deeply before providing the answer。 To reach a reasonable conclusion； we should analyze this problem from two perspectives。
On the one hand； we cannot guarantee that the student will use the portable puter solely for studyrelated purposes。 Most of them have not lived independently； so they do not know how hard it is to make a living。 Once they have the puter at hand； those students who lack selfcontrol may be indulged in puter games or online chatting； which will waste their time and affect their health。
On the other hand； a student without a notebook puter can also be a top student。 Sometimes students do need puters to finish assignments； and the puter rooms on campus can often meet that purpose。 For those students whose majors call for frequent use of puters； they also can buy the desktop one； which is much cheaper。
After careful consideration； we should say that the luxurious learning equipment such as a laptop puter is not necessary unless the parents can easily afford it and the student uses it only to facilitate his work and study。
点评：
大家可能会问：出题人是让我们就题论题写笔记本电脑呢，还是推衍开去泛泛而论这样的奢侈类学习用品呢？在这里我们写成两种情形都是可以的，范文中是先就笔记本电脑展开提问和思索，最后做结时用了“诸如笔记本电脑的奢侈型学习用品”的字眼。
