5202-考研英语考前30天狂背作文-第9部分
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Would you please tell us whether we could have such a room and how much it will cost us？
I am looking forward to your reply。
Sincerely yours；
Li Ming
询问信2
语言注意点：
询问信应语言简洁、清晰，无歧义。语气礼貌、恳切。
Directions 18
You are a tourist and you want to experience a new way of traveling。 Write a letter inquiring about such a traveling program。 Some necessary details must be included。 Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter； using “Li Ming” instead。
Sample：
Dear Mr。 Guo Chang；
My wife and I have read in the traveling book Lonely Planet about your Happy Trails Horse Team。 We are very much interested in going horse trekking with your team。
We want to choose the Ice Mountain route； which will take four days； from July 31 to August 3。 What should we take with us？ Will the guides provide acmodation for us？ How much will the tour cost each of us？
We will reach Songpan on the afternoon of July 30 at about 5 o’clock。 I hope it will not be too late when we arrive at your team。
I am looking forward to your early reply。
Sincerely yours；
Li Ming
介绍信1
结构要点：
介绍信是向收信人介绍某人的信件，包含三个部分：
1． 说明被介绍人的身份；
2． 提出希望收信人做的事情；
3． 如果是请收信人关照被介绍人，表示感谢；如果是请收信人与被介绍人共同工作，则对合作表示乐观。
Directions 19
Suppose that your friend is going to stay at a big city。 Write a letter in about 100 words to introduce her to a friend there。 Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter； using “Li Ming” instead。
Sample：
Dear Linda；
I want to introduce to you the bearer of this letter； Helen Herbert； who is a diligent and intelligent scholar just like you。 She will attend an international conference on economics from August 27 through August 30 at the ShangriLa Hotel of your city。
She will have no problem with her acmodation。 I am sure a talk will benefit both of you a lot。 I have given your mobile phone number to her； and I hope it will not cause any inconvenience for you。
Thank you for your kindness and consideration。
Sincerely yours；
Li Ming
介绍信2
语言注意点：
介绍信应措辞礼貌得体，对被介绍人的说明应简洁明了、重点突出。
Directions 20
Write a letter to inform a colleague of a ing visiting scholar in about 100 words。 Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter； using “Li Ming” instead。
Sample：
Dear Anna；
Please allow me to take this opportunity to introduce a visiting scholar； George Martin； from University of California at Berkeley。 He will be a member of our Program of AsiaPacific Economy for nine months。
George is an enthusiastic and enterprising scholar。 He has done various researches on American and Asian economies for more than ten years。 I am sure that his participation will do a lot of help to our recent research。
George will be arriving here on next Friday and he will soon go to visit you after arrival。 You can introduce the overall development of our program to him； and then explore the details of cooperation。
Sincerely yours；
Li Ming
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Directions 6
Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the two pictures；
2。 interpret their meaning； and
3。 point out the consequences for this phenomenon。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
在写作中，审题这个环节是非常重要的。在图画作文中，我们不仅要仔细审视图画，而且还应将英文的提纲看清楚。这篇文章配了双图，双图多是表示对比关系，这里是凸显时间的先后。提纲包括三个部分：描写图画、阐释含义和指出后果，这就决定了我们文章的结构走向。
Sample：
Two pictures above describe a story which we would never wish to encounter。 In the first one； a large crowd gathered around a man lying on the ground。 One person said； “He seems to be drunk。” Another whispered； “His head and hands seem to be bleeding。” In the second picture； a policeman is asking those who were present； “Why didn’t send him to hospital？” The first one said； “I was hurrying to work。” The second one said； “I was hurrying to school。”
It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attention to this most unfavorable social phenomenon。 Many people are used to finding all kinds of excuses to shirk their responsibilities of helping those who are in need of help。 In their eyes； their own daily businesses are always more important than those of the strangers； even their lives。
This phenomenon will bring a series of harmful consequences。 First； when people refuse to take care of the strangers； the danger of accidents will be much higher； because you have only a small group of people to rely on whenever emergency arises。 Everyone may e across accidents from time to time； and mutual help will prevent most of them from being destructive。 Second； the possibility of attaining a happy life will be much smaller。 If everyone only takes his own interests into consideration in face of big events； the society will be full of selfish people。 The social cost of achieving success will remain high before cooperation bees a habit。
If any one of us wants to enjoy a happy and secure life； we have to be prepared to extend our helping hands to others including strangers； for helping others is equal to helping ourselves。
点评：
这篇文章最终写成了四段，结构非常清晰。第一段分别描写了两副图画，语言简洁流畅。注意这一段不宜过长。
第二段是测度作者的意图，共三句话，第一句是一个经典句型：It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attention to。。。 这句话直指图画所揭示的社会现象，后面两句来具体说明：先说许多人千方百计找理由以逃避帮助他人；然后解释原因，他们认为……注意段中句子之间的逻辑关系，这是非常重要的。
第三段写了该现象引起的有害的后果，该段的首句是个经典的模板句，后分两点来说明。第一点说明当人们不愿意帮助他人时，事故所造成的危险就会大得多，因为那样的话每个人能依靠的人（即亲人和朋友）是非常有限的。这一点的第二句话是个难句，展现了很强的句子内部的逻辑，希望大家用心学习。这句话的意思是：每个人都会遇到事故，而相互帮助可以避免大部分的事故造成毁灭性的后果。到这里，我们可以看出，思想是由语言表达的，要想深刻地表达思想，一定要多模仿、多操练。第二点是从更广阔的角度去考虑问题，说明获得幸福生活的可能性减小了。社会充满了自私的人们，获得成功的社会成本陡增。
末段是结语——如果我们想要享受幸福的生活，我们应向他人（包括陌生人）伸出援手。
第二段的第二句中的shirk ones responsibility表示“逃避责任”。第三段第二句的emergency表示“紧急情况”。第三句的destructive表示“造成重大损害的”。第五句的in face of表示“面临”。最后一句的cooperation bees a habit表示“合作成为一种习惯”。
心得：
1．文章的结构层次一定要清楚，这是充分理解提纲与图画构成语境的结果。
2．学习写作主从复合句，充分理解句子内部的逻辑关系。通过本文，重点学习条件状语从句。
典型的条件状语从句：If everyone only takes his own interests into consideration in face of big events； the society will be full of selfish people。
嵌套原因状语从句的条件状语从句：If any one of us wants to enjoy a happy and secure life； we have to be prepared to extend our helping hands to others including strangers； for helping others is equal to helping ourselves。
Directions 7
Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the two pictures；
2。 interpret their meaning； and
3。 point out the consequences for this phenomenon。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
提纲包含了三个部分，这篇文章可以分为四段来写，其中末段是结语。真实写作中前三段可以与提纲有明显的对应关系，这样的安排思路清晰，易于把握。
Sample：
In the pictures； we see clearly a person who claims to begin his grand scheme tomorrow。 In the first picture； he claims that he will begin tomorrow because he is not yet well prepared today。 In the second picture； when tomorrow really es； he again says he will begin later because he is not feeling well at the moment。
What can we say at seeing such pictures？ We can always find excuses for our mistakes； failures and inaction； but how can we make real progress in our life？ We will never ever grow up if we keep on finding excuses instead of looking directly into the matter； analyzing the situation objectively and taking action as soon as possible。
Delay has a lot of bad consequences。 In many cases； we will lose the chance to succeed forever。 Time is limited； and so are youth and enthusiasm。 When we form a plan； we should always try our best to put it into practice immediately。 We should not worry about failure； because we can always learn from it。 Only if we keep on trying and never stop； will we make progress and eventually turn our dream into reality。
The important thing in life is to have a great aim and the determination to attain it。 Without action； a great aim will be nothing more than a castle in the air。
点评：
第一段分别描述了两幅图画，独特之处在于首先将两副图画的共同之处提取出来——描写一个人说明天就要开始宏伟的计划，而后分别描述两副图画的不同之处——这样做的好处是使段落的条理清晰。
第二段的首句使用了设问句，一下子引起了读者的兴趣，而后自己给出答案——我们总是能为错误、失败和无行动找到理由，可是我们又怎能取得进步呢？这个句子中使用了平行的名词和反问句，效果强烈，非常引人注目。该段第三句进一步说明，使用instead of�
