5202-考研英语考前30天狂背作文-第6部分
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Direction 30
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should
1） describe the drawing，
2） give possible reasons for the phenomenon； and
3） suggest possible solutions for the problem。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
该文提纲可分为三个部分：描述图画；给出图画所表现的现象的原因；给出解决问题的办法。这是一种非常常见的文章模式。在提纲中直接给出主题的情况不多，如果没有给出，就应该在第一段或第二段开头明确地点出来。图画题一般有两种情况，一种是平铺直叙，直接写图画反映的问题或现象；一种是含义深刻，简洁的图画中蕴涵着深刻的道理。一般来说，后者的难度较高。这里属于前一种情况。
Sample：
In the picture； we can see clearly that two small children are showing off their father’s business cards。 One says proudly； “My father is the manager of his department。” And the other immediately laughs at him and utters； “Oh； that’s nothing。 My father is the CEO of a multinational corporation。”
The reasons why such a worrying phenomenon arises； in my belief； are as follows。 First； in the social transformation period； some people pay more and more attention to wealth and status； and link success to such superficial factors； thus making a destructive pact on children。 Second； today’s media； to some extent； have actually aggravated such an unfavorable situation。 In films and TV series a happy and ideal life is often depicted as a luxurious one； which will inevitably have an adverse effect on young people who are still not mature enough to distinguish between right and wrong。 Third； teachers； on many occasions； have not done a satisfactory job。 The present education system sometimes attaches too much attention to the scores and grades of students and overlooks their personality development。
To change the present unfavorable situation all of us must make immediate and substantial efforts。 The government should try it best to create a social atmosphere in which people cherish diligence； conscience and simplicity。 Teachers and schools should make every effort to teach the students to grow up into responsible and enterprising citizens who are determined to contribute to the development of the munity； the nation and the whole world。 Parents should let students get in touch with the society； helping them know that a meaningful life is one that brings significance to others。 Only in this way can we hope to solve such a disturbing problem and ensure the brilliant future of our nation。
点评：
该文共分三段。第一段描述图画。一般说来，先描述图画，后点明主题的情形比较多——这样写重在归纳，比较重视逻辑和事物发展的内部联系。而本文首句即点明主题，即本文所述的现象——孩子吹嘘父亲职位、相互攀比的现象——这样写开门见山，非常有力度。
第二段写了该现象产生的原因。第一句话是段落的主题句，而后分社会、媒体和老师三个方面来说。
第三段写解决问题的办法，第一句话是主题句，之后分别写政府、老师和家长正确的做法。这里没有使用象first；second；third这样的连接词，但由于采用了平行的主语，仍达到了结构清晰的效果。最后一句话是结论句，使用了强势的倒装句，句中使用了连词and，前面写“解决问题”，正好与提纲相扣，后面写“保证国家的美好明天”，是升华的部分，请大家用心体会末句的写法。
心得：
第二段与第三段均分三点来写，其中两点严格呼应，另一点并未严格呼应（家长）。这是平行之间见变化的高级写法，即两点是显性呼应，一点是隐性呼应。
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Direction 21
Read the following story carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 retell the story briefly；
2。 interpret the meaning；
3。 make your ments。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
题目：
Where are we going？
A boat docked in a tiny Mexican village。 An American tourist plimented the Mexican fisherman on the quality of his fish and asked how long it took him to catch them。 “Not very long；” answered the Mexican。
“But then； why didnt you stay out longer and catch more？” asked the American。
The Mexican explained that his small catch was sufficient to meet his needs and those of his family。
The American asked； “But what do you do with the rest of your time？”
“I sleep late； fish a little； play with my children； and take a siesta with my wife。 In the evenings； I go into the village to see my friends； play the guitar； and sing a few songs。。。I have a full life。”
The American interrupted； “I have an MBA from Harvard and I can help you！ You should start by fishing longer every day。 You can then sell the extra fish you catch。 With the extra revenue； you can buy a bigger boat。 With the extra money the larger boat will bring； you can buy a second one and a third one and so on until you have an entire fleet of trawlers。 Instead of selling your fish to a middle man； you can negotiate directly with the processing plants and maybe even open your own plant。 You can then leave this little village and move to Mexico City； Los Angeles； or even New York City！ From there you can direct your huge enterprise。”
“How long would that take？” asked the Mexican。 “Twenty； perhaps twentyfive years；” replied the American。 “And after that？”
“Afterwards？ Thats when it gets really interesting；” answered the American； laughing。 “When your business gets really big； you can start selling stocks and make millions！”
“Millions？ Really？ And after that？”
“After that youll be able to retire； live in a tiny village near the coast； sleep late； play with your children； catch a few fish； take a siesta； and spend your evenings enjoying your friends！”
审题：
在本书的大作文中，我们不仅为大家提供了图画题和图表题，还提供了一些比较特殊的题目，比如这篇看文章写作。我们这样做，不仅因为国外考试中有类似的形式，更重要的是想拓宽大家的视野，提高大家的应变能力。
该题目先给出了一篇极富哲理的三百余字的短文，而后提出了三点要求，简述该故事；阐释其中含义；给出你的评论。这篇文章可以分成三段来写：第一段是简要地重述该故事；第二段阐释含义并作出评论；最后一段是结语。
Sample：
In the above story； an American tourist wishes to turn a Mexican fisherman into a millionaire so that the latter can enjoy a happy life。 The fisherman simply turns him down because he has been living that kind of happy life now。
This story makes every one of us look at the ultimate question of happiness closer and deeper。 Do we need to tell others how to be happy？ Is getting rich the only way to be a happy person？ Does earning a lot of money surely bring an intense feeling of happiness？ Happiness is a largely related with individual perception； and there is definitely no need for us to reshape others’ lives in the name of bringing them happiness。 Furthermore； being rich does not necessarily bring happiness； if we cannot control ourselves to spend money in the right way。 Finally； to travel happily and hopefully is equal to and even better than to arrive。 It is not wise at all to sacrifice youth； health or today’s happiness just for a bright future in our dreams。
Happiness is a feeling。 We go a thousand miles and spend many years to pursue what we actually can grasp today。 Around us there are too many people who are busy all day； and those who are smart enough to enjoy life are always few。
点评：
这篇文章分为三段。第一段写得非常简洁，这一段很能体现出我们总结概括的能力。该段只有两句话，突出描写了美国人的意图和墨西哥渔民截然相反的态度。
第二段是核心段落。第一句直接点出了该文讨论的主题：幸福。而后三句话连续三个问题，对文中以美国人为代表的一大批人的观点表示质疑。后四句给出回答：第五句说幸福与个人的感觉相关；第六句说变得富有不一定能带来幸福；第七、八句最耐人寻味：快乐地、充满希望地旅行甚至比到达更好，为了梦想中的光明未来而牺牲自己的青春、健康或今天的幸福是不明智的。其中第七句暗引了苏格兰作家Robert Louis Stevenson的名句：To travel hopefully is a better thing than to arrive。
最后一段做结：幸福是一种感觉。我们跨越千里，等待多年所追逐的其实就在身边。匆匆忙忙的人总是太多，能享受生活的人却寥寥无几啊。
心得：
如果提纲中给出的要求是阐释含义并给出评论，这类文章是比较难写的。这篇文章大家一定要细细琢磨，领悟其中的深刻含义。
Direction 22
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the picture；
2。 interpret the meaning of the picture；
3。 draw your conclusion。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
《井干方知水可贵》该图画以简洁的笔触说明了深刻的道理，这类文章考察的可能性是相当大的。
Sample：
The picture focuses on a person standing by a well。 Looking at the empty barrel at hand； he sighs； “My God； there is no water at all。 I should not have wasted it。”
We never know the worth of water till the well is dry。 Similarly； we never realize the worth of the best things in life until they are lost。 When we are young； some of us bear a destination in mind and try to reach it at all costs。 In the due process； we either lose health or our friends—even if we reach that destination at last； will we be happy？ Others always think God is not fair to them—they are so frustrated that they can not accumulate the courage to change their lives for the better。 When youth bees history； their world will be even colder and more hopeless。
Many of the best things in the world are just in our own hands。 It is certainly not easy to realize this point； and even more difficult to cherish them to the uttermost。 If we realize the value of youth； health and friends； we will be among the happiest persons of the world。
点评：
这篇文章的布局相当简单，共分三段。第一段描述图画。第二段阐释含义
